well...here it is..more peoms! it's not that good, but tell me what you think ok? THAT INCLUDES YOU NGHIA

Orange

In the morning or at night
Warms me up and gives me light

Like a miniature sun, painting the dull grey morning
With red-yellow sunbeams,
Freshly rising from the hot sun-bakery

Painted on the belly of the low clouds,
It stands out in any cramped crowd


(p.s. i know you already read it nghia, just tell me what you think of it again, i forgot what you said before)